Feedback/improvements









In this blog post, I will display and evaluate the feedback I have obtained from my fellow media students and more importantly, my target audience who judged my magazine pages.

To gain feedback for my magazine pages, I asked people from my target audience on what they think about my production.

Feedback on Double Page Spread

Using the feedback I got from my target audience, I decided to implement these changes for example one of the people I asked said that "you're magazines front cover should have a more distinct color in addition to the black and white to highlight important aspects". I have changed my front cover so that it highlights the important aspects by adding a red font for some subtitles on the page. This allows it to attract the audience's attention. I used all of the feedback I achieved to make improvements to my magazine.  the most significant improvement i did was the reformatting of the contents page. I saw this as the weakest page out. I have shown images in this blog to show the changes I made to my production.






Feedback on Double Page(continued)

Feedback on Front Cover

Feedback on Front Cover

 Front Cover



Contents Page

Double Page Spread